Comments on: Beginnings……. http://www.dawn-schiller.com/2004/10/09/beginnings/ babblings! Fri, 21 Nov 2008 02:36:14 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Rysque http://www.dawn-schiller.com/2004/10/09/beginnings/#comment-858 Rysque Wed, 16 Nov 2005 21:13:58 +0000 /?p=10#comment-858 Dawn, As a writer and person with a heartfelt connection with you, I want you to know that you are a beautiful person and what you are doing is well worth the effort. Continue to be a blessing to us all. Dawn "Rysque" McGhee Dawn,

As a writer and person with a heartfelt connection with you, I want you to know that you are a beautiful person and what you are doing is well worth the effort. Continue to be a blessing to us all.

Dawn “Rysque” McGhee

]]> By: karla http://www.dawn-schiller.com/2004/10/09/beginnings/#comment-42 karla Tue, 12 Oct 2004 13:43:04 +0000 /?p=10#comment-42 what beautiful prose! it's true! I agree! I could smell the fallen leaves and feel the autumn chill in the air. what beautiful prose! it’s true! I agree! I could smell the fallen leaves and feel the autumn chill in the air.

]]> By: Lesley http://www.dawn-schiller.com/2004/10/09/beginnings/#comment-41 Lesley Sun, 10 Oct 2004 18:30:05 +0000 /?p=10#comment-41 That was beautiful, I actually felt like I was there with you. You are a true inspiration and a wonderful person. Thank You for all your encouraging words and your strength. God Bless That was beautiful, I actually felt like I was there with you. You are a true inspiration and a wonderful person. Thank You for all your encouraging words and your strength. God Bless

]]> By: Glo http://www.dawn-schiller.com/2004/10/09/beginnings/#comment-40 Glo Sat, 09 Oct 2004 23:33:27 +0000 /?p=10#comment-40 Great post, Dawn. You offered your readers a view of your world in a heartfelt and spontaneous way. Those moments of complete perfection are not always seen or felt, let alone expressed, even though they skirt the edge of what we think of as real and wait for that one moment of discovery. Beautiful is the word that comes into my mind that describes what you wrote. You "showed" what beauty looks, feels, and sounds like rather than trying to tell your readers what beauty is. This is a sign of a good writer, one who can give their readers an opportunity to have an experience without getting in their way by telling them what they should feel and think about an event and/or story. Showing the experience and allowing your reader to join you as it unfolds gives them a experiential peek into your world, whether it be today, yesterday, or tomorrows world. Very well written. If this short piece is any indication of the writing style in your book, I can't wait to read it. Great post, Dawn. You offered your readers a view of your world in a heartfelt and spontaneous way. Those moments of complete perfection are not always seen or felt, let alone expressed, even though they skirt the edge of what we think of as real and wait for that one moment of discovery. Beautiful is the word that comes into my mind that describes what you wrote. You “showed” what beauty looks, feels, and sounds like rather than trying to tell your readers what beauty is. This is a sign of a good writer, one who can give their readers an opportunity to have an experience without getting in their way by telling them what they should feel and think about an event and/or story. Showing the experience and allowing your reader to join you as it unfolds gives them a experiential peek into your world, whether it be today, yesterday, or tomorrows world.

Very well written. If this short piece is any indication of the writing style in your book, I can’t wait to read it.

]]> By: Maria Morris-Burke http://www.dawn-schiller.com/2004/10/09/beginnings/#comment-39 Maria Morris-Burke Sat, 09 Oct 2004 23:16:40 +0000 /?p=10#comment-39 Bravo, you made this magical fall night with your daughter very real to me. Life may have been very difficult for you, but out of ashes has arisen a strong (as in strength of chararacter) woman. Dawn, you know your abilities, talents, and your skills. You know what makes life worthwhile. I applaud you and please continue writing from your heart. The world needs to hear you. Bravo, you made this magical fall night with your daughter very real to me. Life may have been very difficult for you, but out of ashes has arisen a strong (as in strength of chararacter) woman. Dawn, you know your abilities, talents, and your skills. You know what makes life worthwhile. I applaud you and please continue writing from your heart. The world needs to hear you.

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